Wednesday, November 4, 2009

Should I Stay or Should I Go? Unit 1

What motivates immigrants to come to the United States (today)?

I think what motivates the immigrants to come to the United States is because they think there coming to a better life because maybe the country they live in isn't safe and it's dangerous . Some people think it isn't right for immigrant's to come to america because they dont want bad things to happen in there community. I think if immigrants are coming to the united states they might want to make money for there family's because they dont have enough money to help feed and clothe there children. And even let there children have have a better education and a safe place that they can call home and maybe even better them self's in many ways's even if it's art'or even writing poetry.And if i was a immigrate trying to come to the United states to better myself and to make money to send back to my country i would say i would stay in the united states. I would also move for freedom because people judge peole that are immigrants and not knowing what is there reason for coming to america because there is alot of wars that go on in every Country .

2 comments:

  1. I agree with the reasons why people come from differnt place to U.S. I also would say that not everyone who come to U.S. come for the right reasons, but there are only a few people who come for the wrong reasons but people see that and say everyone who come from differnt Courty come from the wrong reason which is not true.

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  2. Good details in this post. You answered the second question in a different way than I was expecting, but it is a logical response.

    Some small errors that I can help you fix for maximum points. As is 17/20 points.

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